Sounds sick and a tad bit demented

I LOVE IT!

That actually sounds pretty intersting
Make sure you add light and funny parts to break the tension. Mary Higgins Clark writes beautiful mystery novels but the story dosent have any humour and it is very tense.

It’s very original. I’ve never really read anything like that, but I’m not into the whole horror genre thing. But I’m a writer, too. So if you need any advice just email me!

the story sounds awesome and i would really love to read it, but there’s a small problem. i think you should change the title of the book.
make the title itself look a bit more mysterious other than just giving out the main idea of the book.

you should give the idea… but what i’m saying is just make the reader more curious coz as soon as one takes a book, the reader’s attention goes directly to the title. so give it a blast!

something like “mysterious deaths” or “mysterious suicides” or “mysterious girl deaths” or something similar to that.

good luck with the book.